报考托福 的考生想要取得好成绩，平时就要多加练习。写作是其中的一项难点，在写作中有一些常见的诟病句，下面托福 写作辅导就为大家讲解。
　　托福写作辅导：
　　1. I am not good at maths, but English
　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
　　2. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children”s leisure time?
　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children”s leisure time?
　　3.It is children who clear about their interests.
　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
　　4. I agree the latter idea.(漏掉介词是大家在托福写作中低分的常见病句。)
　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
　　5. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
　　6. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
　　7. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.(语义重复也是大家在托福写作中导致低分的主要原因)
　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.