考研 英语作文 热门话题范文：啃老族
　　As is vividly depicted in the picture, a father has received a letter from his son, on which without anything except(改为but)a word: money. It reveals a serious issue of (改为in)our society: more and more people live off their parents, even if they are old enough. We call the people who is(建议删掉，直接用简单句表达即可) “boomerang kids”.A careful analysis of cartoon may reveals some reasons under the problem, which involves three causes. For one thing,Chinese parents indulge their children so that it takesfew(改为little，few修饰可数名词，little修饰不可数名词) time to develop their children(改为children”s，孩子们的) independence. In addition(建议改为For another，与前面For one thing对应起来), the boomerang kids may never realize the hard working and enterprising spirit is(改为are，宾语从句的主语用and连接，谓语动词用复数)a magic weapon to make their life pleasant, efficient ,(加and)successful. Last but not least, the education in our school ,especailly(拼写错误，改为especially)university, attach(改为attaches) more importance to academic marks, which ignores the significance of students” independence ablilty(拼写错误，改为ability).In order to solve these issues, both family and school should join hands to create an free atmosphere to spirit the young people take care of themselves, while at the same time, the boomerang kids(改为kids”) efforts are indispensible, (加and，两个句子之间用连词连接)they should change the lazy behaviors. To conclude my essay, I would like to quote an old saying “a young idler, an old beggar”.
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　　整体来说，文章写得不错;但还存在个别简单的语法错误。作者在写作完之后若可以花费几分钟时间来回读文章，便会减少不必要的错误。考研英语作文的整体思路你已经基本掌握，后面要做的就是多积累高分佳句，为自己的文章增彩;再者，写完之后一定要认真检查，减少失分点。加油吧，祝你考研成功!
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issue ['iʃju:] 想一想再看
n. 发行物，期刊号，争论点
vi. & vt

quote [kwəut] 想一想再看
n. 引用
v. 引述，举证，报价
联想记忆 X 单词quote 联想记忆：
读：抠他，把他的话从嘴里抠出来－引证
conclude [kən'klu:d] 想一想再看
vi. 总结，作出决定
vt. 使结束，推断出
联想记忆 X 单词conclude 联想记忆：
con全部，clude关闭－嘴全部闭上－结束（讨论）
efficient [i'fiʃənt] 想一想再看
adj. 效率高的，胜任的
联想记忆 X 单词efficient 联想记忆：
ef出+fic做，制作+ent→能做出事来→有效率的
indulge [in'dʌldʒ] 想一想再看
vt. 纵情于，放任，迁就
vi. 放纵自己于
联想记忆 X 单词indulge 联想记忆：
可以通过发音记，但是有点儿◎＃￥％…※×in进入，dull（adj 迟钝的），ge：进入迟钝状态，因为沉迷于酒色。
independence [.indi'pendəns] 想一想再看
n. 独立，自主，自立

academic [.ækə'demik] 想一想再看
adj. 学术的，学院的，理论的
n.

attach [ə'tætʃ] 想一想再看
v. 附上，系上，贴上，使依恋
联想记忆 X 单词attach 联想记忆：
tach栓于柱上，拿住
analysis [ə'næləsis] 想一想再看
n. 分析，解析
联想记忆 X 单词analysis 联想记忆：
lysis分开－分析
except [ik'sept] 想一想再看
vt. 除，除外
prep. & conj.
联想记忆 X 单词except 联想记忆：
ex外.cept拿→除…之外.把除外