十． 不连贯(incoherence)
不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语，或是结构上不畅通。这也是考生常犯的毛病。
例１． the fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth.
剖析：the fresh water 与逗号后的it 不连贯。it 与things 在数方面不一致。
改为：
fresh water is the most important thing in the world.
十． 不连贯(incoherence)
不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语，或是结构上不畅通。这也是考生常犯的毛病。
例１． the fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth.
剖析：the fresh water 与逗号后的it 不连贯。it 与things 在数方面不一致。
改为：
fresh water is the most important thing in the world.
