四. 悬垂修饰语(dangling modifiers)
  所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清.例如:at the age of ten, my grandfather died. 这句中"at the age of ten"只点出十岁时,但没有说明” 谁”十岁时.按一般推理不可能是my grandfather, 如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点,全句就不那么费解了.
  改为:
  when i was ten, my grandfather died.
  例1. to do well in college, good grades are essential.
  剖析:句中不定式短语 “to do well in college” 的逻辑主语不清楚.
  改为:
  to do well in college, a student needs good grades.