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25. A, 在家工作的比办公室工作的差
感谢zhaixuting
没有原题,上月考古
V3.it is financially unwise for people working at home。Author给了三点理由,第一,家里各种noisy
neighbor, telephone call什么的会打扰到你;第二,在家里工作的人没有schedule;第三,在家会socially
&professionally isolated,所以不能career advancement。Therefore,作者总结,对long-tern
在家工作earning less money than在办公室工作。
感谢athue提供的思路:
我从三个方面来说的:
第一,无理假设,no evidence is stated in the argument so support
that在家工作的人没schedule和会有很多distraction打扰到你。
第二,忽略他因,作者没有考虑到career advancement的其他原因,只说员工如果不professional的话,那就没有career
advancement。
第三,没有全面考虑有关earning的多个方面,即使在office工作可能收入会高一些,但是员工的成本也高啦,比如transportation fee。26. No.9 The following appeared in the opinion column of a financial magazine.
“On average, middle-aged consumers devote 39 percent of their retail expenditure
to department store products and services, while for younger consumers the
average is only 25 percent. Since the number of middle-aged people will increase
dramatically within the next decade, department stores can expect retail sales
to increase significantly during that period. Furthermore, to take advantage of
the trend, these stores should begin to replace some of those products intended
to attract the younger consumer with products intended to attract the
middle-aged consumer.”
9. 财经杂志的意见栏:
一般而言,中年消费者的零售消费额的39%用于专卖店的商品何服务。而在年轻一些的消费者中这一比例仅有25%。由于中年消费者的数量在下一10年中将大幅增长,专卖店可以预期他们的销售额会有大幅增长。进一步,为利用这一趋势,这些店应该开始将一些吸引年轻消费者的商品替换为吸引中年消费者的商品。
感谢francislaw
提供观点:
1、The absolute value of consumption should be given by the author.
2、all things are equal
3、Whether the increase of profit gained by attracting more middle-aged consumers
will be offset
4、by the reduction of profit because of the loss of young consumers.
27. AA: 某报纸事业专栏声称sticking to an office job is the best way to earn money in the long term. 然后说了一堆诋毁working from home的理由: distractions from phone calls, housework or noises from neighbors; without a set schedule, people tend to procrastinate and avoid work; the possibility of social and professional isolation will decrease chance of career advancement. 然后就总结说an office job比起在家工作长远的发财机会大很多。 无原题,考古:V1.说和办公室稳定工作比起来,self-employed and work at home earn less in long run。理由有三个:一个是在家会有distractions from phone calls, noisy neighbors and household chords;另外一个是self-employed的人with no set schedule,因此会avoid working,有另外一个单词不懂,哼唧~,大概就是说工作起来就不主动吧;第三个是说会socially and professionally isolated,因此会丧失很多其他工作机会。
感谢athue提供的思路:
我从三个方面来说的:
第一,无理假设,no evidence is stated in the argument so support that在家工作的人没schedule和会有很多distraction打扰到你。
第二,忽略他因,作者没有考虑到career advancement的其他原因,只说员工如果不professional的话,那就没有career advancement。
第三,没有全面考虑有关earning的多个方面,即使在office工作可能收入会高一些,但是员工的成本也高啦,比如transportation fee。
28. AA 考的是 cell phone manufacturing 那题。
感谢ashlary
考古:手机生产需要大量的贵金属,而贵金属的价格在过去十年中大幅变动。工厂过去的产量一直在增加,并预计将来也会增加。因此,立即购买大量贵金属会锁定变动并且达到利益最大化。
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